Monday, May 29, 2017

Regenia Un_Pre-screening review for Group 2B

Regenia Un (Group1B)
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Review for Group2B:International Dav

Being an international student, I am so glad to see a video depicting international students' perspectives. This video clearly tells the intention of them pursuing higher education in the United States and allows the audience to know more about their thoughts and opinions. The biggest strength of this video is that it is very organized. The introduction, the interviews and the analysis are well-structured, making the development of the video approachable for the audience. In addition, the objective is straightforward and easy to understand.


However, since I am a design major student, I have some suggestions on how to make this video visually better. You guys may use some shapes beneath the text to make the words more visible or change the color of the fonts, because some of them are hard to read right now. Apart from that, you may also make the interview videos brighter so as to match the brightness of all clips. Additionally, it would be better if you guys can extend a little bit on the introduction part so as to tell your objective to the audience. Moreover, instead of targeting students who are pursuing higher education, you guys may also aim at transferring the stories of AIS to AA. This may be a good try to connect all Asian students.

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