Youtube link: https://youtu.be/DIWv2SXbdic
Group members & Section:
Anneka Christie, Carissa Fejarang, Johnny Mai, Yueming Tan
Section A02
Objective and Target Audience:
We want to spread awareness and make people understand the phenomenon that is known as imposter syndrome.
This is intended for the general public, but it is geared specifically for young people who are finding their place.
Complete or work in progress?:
This video is a work in progress
Specific feedback:
We would like to know how people feel about our structure and flow of our video and if the video
had any sort of impact on them. We would also like to know if any parts of our video need more explanation or emphasis.
Extra Sources:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQUxL4Jm1Lo
https://repository.usfca.edu/listening_to_the_voices/12/
https://core.ac.uk/download/pdf/48502317.pdf
https://panasianism.wordpress.com/2016/08/26/the-aim-asian-imposter-syndrome/
https://medium.com/@vhjtang/on-model-minorities-and-imposter-syndrome-in-tech-4b30b9de4b21
https://www.nytimes.com/2018/06/23/us/confronting-asian-american-stereotypes.html
http://www.m.www.na-businesspress.com/JHETP/ParkmanA_Web16_1_.pdf
a) What were the strengths and weaknesses?
ReplyDelete-- We definitely enjoy the concept. The general flow of the video looks good, and when it all comes together we know it will make sense. However, attempting to explain the definition of Imposter syndrome on my own, was difficult even after watching the video multiple times. So maybe, providing a “layman’s” terms definition would help make the argument better. Maybe accompany some background music throughout the video. Also, it was very obvious that there was different styles throughout the video, so maybe picking one kind of style will have it flow better. Voiceover could be slowed down.
b) What would you recommend they change?
-- Adding an interview would make their case a little stronger. I’m sure this is something a lot of different people go through but don’t really see it as a “problem” so to speak. So, simply asking people about their accomplishments and seeing how they respond could be more than enough to make it more personal and be able to reach the target audience.
c) Was their objective clear? Did this group meet their objective?
-- The objective is clear. I definitely can see that they are bringing to the general audience’s attention that something like this exists and not to shy away from it. I think when the whole video comes together their objective will really be met. But for now, I’m left with more questions than actually feeling something. Maybe being more clear in explaining the concept and refine the subtitles. We’d like to see more of an expansion on the Asian-American community if possible.
Group 1: Wednesday Section --
Kyrene Giezl Gutierrez, Victor Dionisio, Tianyi Cui, Jianwei Zhu