Section A03 Pre Screening Review for Tristan's Group by Marissa Gomez, Natalie Lortz and Nai Saechao

You guys are off to a good start. The animations in the beginning was very cool and it is informative. The editing for the animations are impressive. During the text near the end maybe make the text last longer, so people can read it. Also, add some color to the text to make the words pop out more. maybe adding more pictures near the end will help as well. Not sure if you guys are going to talk more about the text in your narrative or not, but the text left us hanging because it ends with a question.