Friday, March 1, 2019

A03 Prescreening Feedback for Natalie's Group by Emerald Vang

  • Their strengths were that they had good questions and a good interviewee that answered well, their weaknesses were that there wasn’t a question applied for the general Asian community, it was more towards the interviewee, but the advice was good for all of the audience

  • The video is almost 5 min long when there's a 3 min max. Maybe take out the pictures in between interview questions? The pictures also felt awkward in between questions.
  • There was a part that sounded like a mistake which wasn’t edited out at time 3:43. Because of this, the last question was unclear
  • I would suggest some light music during the intro and end where they show pictures?
  • They have the interviewee’s story, the parent's views, advice to people who want to come out, how she felt after coming out, and another question which was unclear
    • I suggest adding a question to gear towards the general Asian community like what are the views in Asian culture about LGBTQ or something similar
  • I also suggest an ending clip instead of cutting from the interviewee and straight into picture slides
  • Their objective was clear because it is advice to others, which was answered

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