This is such an important and not widely known topic. It's clear from your presentation you're knowledgeable and passionate about the issue. However, in viewing the video alone, it was a missed opportunity. Most noticeable is the lack of introduction and conclusion. We were not introduced to what the video was about and after the last interviewing, the video ended without a clear message or conclusion. Also, both the documentary and interview with the eye-witness student, the interviews went entirely too long and needed to either be broken up or heavily edited. Also, a more thorough literature review would have also revealed more important research materials for you. I hope you'll be motivated enough to edit the video in the future with the suggestions above. A revised SAPSA would be a valuable informational source on the web.
This is such an important and not widely known topic. It's clear from your presentation you're knowledgeable and passionate about the issue. However, in viewing the video alone, it was a missed opportunity. Most noticeable is the lack of introduction and conclusion. We were not introduced to what the video was about and after the last interviewing, the video ended without a clear message or conclusion. Also, both the documentary and interview with the eye-witness student, the interviews went entirely too long and needed to either be broken up or heavily edited. Also, a more thorough literature review would have also revealed more important research materials for you. I hope you'll be motivated enough to edit the video in the future with the suggestions above. A revised SAPSA would be a valuable informational source on the web.
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